Cutline Checklist*
Here are some tips for writing
good cutlines:
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Is
it complete? Is there anything unusual in the picture that is not explained in
the cutline?
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Does
it identify? Identification is the basic purpose of a cutline.
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Does
it tell when and
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Where the
picture was shot?
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Does
it tell what is in the picture, not what is in the story? (In other words,
don’t repeat the lead of the story.)
ü
Does
it have the names right? This means are they spelled correctly and in correct
order (from left).
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Is
it easy to read? The sentences must be short, direct and in proper sequence.
ü
Is
it specific? Does it give information on specific points of interest in the
picture, or does it merely echo the obvious?
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Does
it have adjectives? Let the reader decide whether the subject is “middle-aged,”
“glamorous” and so on. Also, don’t interpret emotions.
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Does
the picture suggest another picture? Going to press without the other picture
is like running a story before getting all the facts.
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Use
present tense in the first sentence that gives identification, the who and what in the picture, and what is happening.
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Use
another tense in following sentences and use time element.
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Be
clever, but not cutesy
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Try
for identification, but don’t stress fact it is unknown. Find a label for those
pictured.
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Identify
from left to right, and indicated with left if it is not obvious.
ü
Use
full sentences.
*Some of this comes from the Associated Press
Managing Editors’ Newspaper Committee under the leadership of Emmett Dedmon of the Chicago Sun-Times.