JOU 4201:Newspaper Editing - Lecture (Spring 2009)

Florida Gym 0230: 11:45 a.m. to 12:35 p.m. T & Th.

Lab Instructors:


Sections  2670
Dr.  Lewis


Section  2671
Prof. Hallam 

Section  2672

Prof. Tonnessen



Section  6011
Prof. Hallam

Instructors'
Bios
         


Ronald R. Rodgers
Assistant Professor    
Dept. of Journalism
University of Florida
3053 Weimer Hall Phone:  352-392-8847
Fax:   352-846-2673
rrodgers@jou.ufl.edu
   


Please notify me if you find
any dead links

Help With Editing

If you look at no other,
look at this one:

Newsroom 101: Exercises in Grammar, Usage and Associated Press Style

(When it asks for your
 Newsroom 101  name,
 just hit "OK" twice
and you are in.)


Exercise Central for AP Style

Ask the Editor at AP

Diagramming Sentences

The Blue Book of Grammar
and Punctuation

Modern English Grammar:
A Hypertext Book

Common Errors in English

American Copy Editors Society's
(ACES) Online Quizzes

ACES Discussion Board

Purdue Writing Lab


Nuts & Bolts
of Editing

20 Common Errors

Perplexed by Plurals

Who & Whom
Whomever (video)
Who & Whom Quiz
Who & Whom Quiz Answers
Passive 1
Passive 2
Possession Exorcises
Lay & Lie
Affect & Effect
Getting Organized
How Newspapers Work
Duties & Common Errors
Editing Skills Set 2
Editing Skills Set 1
Fair Comment & Criticism
Polling Errors
Trademarks
Headline 1
Headlines 2

SEO Readings:
-- SEO Tips
-- Headline Magic
-- Written for Google
-- Google SEO
-- What is Search Editor?
Prof. Kaplan's 20 Tips

Cutlines & Photos
Murder Most Foul
In the Block
Burglar or Robber?
Allegedly Innocent Suspects
1st v. 6th Amendments
Ethics, Taste, Sensitivity, Diversity & Gender


Other Useful Stuff

Special Word Problems
Subjunctive Mood
Spelling
Cutting Stories
Compiling Stories
Mathiness
Figuring Percentage
Metric Conversion
Comma Basics

How to Punctuate
 by Russell Baker

Roy Peter Clark’s Fifty Writing Tools: Quick List


Readings, Etc.
in Journalism


How online site keeps up with breaking news: NYT Example video

NYT Newsroom slide-show

Googlezone video

Visit to  washingtonpost.com video

Online News is the Future - Learn it

Acquiring Online Skills

Can you name all the presidents?

It's a Confusing Moment to be a Young Journalist

Dr. R's Journalism Links

Dr. R's Journalism Readings

Zappa on Crossfire video

Film about newspaper business video

What We Call the News video

The Pensonal Computer

Citizen Journalism: From Pamphlet to Blog  video

Web 2.0 The Machine is Us/ing Us video

Understanding Web 2. video

Using Google Reader video

Contemporary Journalists discuss the political reporting of Hunter S. Thompson video


Stop Big Media


Jobs, Internships, Fellowships,

Hearst Fellowships

Chips Quinn Scholars

Dow Jones Newspaper Fund

CubReporters.org


Dr. R's Job Board

Cultural Literacy
This list  is just a sample of the kinds of things journalists  should know something about

"We Didn't Start the Fire"

Articles of Confederation
Missouri Compromise
Open Door policy
Bay of Pigs
Seward's Folly
Dred Scott case
"Great Awakening"
League of Nations
Gadsden Purchase

Land Grant Act
Louisiana Purchase

My Lai

Sen. Joseph McCarthy
French and Indian War
trustbusting
Prohibition
War of 1812
New Deal
Emancipation Proclamation
Ellis Island
wet feet, dry feet policy
Marshall Plan
isolationism

Christopher Wren
War Powers Act
junta
National Organization for
 Women

Selective Service System
4F
Stamp Act
constitutional monarchies
Brown v. Board of Education
secretary of state
electoral college
NAACP
Plessy v. Ferguson
Double V campaign
Rosewood Massacre
The Constitution
Bill of Rights
First Amendment
Second Amendment
Third Amendment
Fourth Amendment
Fifth Amendment
Sixth Amendment
Seventh Amendment
Eighth Amendment
Ninth Amendment
10th Amendment
ERA
19th Amendment
Federalists
Voting Rights Act of 1965
separation of church and state
system of checks and balances
Alien and Sedition Acts of 1798
civil dis­obedience
writ of habeas corpus
writ of certiorari
Miranda v. Arizona
Dow Jones Composite Average
Federal Reserve Board
Euclid
Thomas Malthus
Thomas Hobbes
gross national product
bankruptcy
FDIC
protectionism
mortgage
initial public offer­ing
proportional income tax
progressive income tax
regressive income tax
value added  income tax
flat tax
federal deficit
bull market
bear market
Keynesian economics
Milton Friedman
consumer price index
depression
recession
tariff
Federal Trade Commission
cost-of-living index
Social Security
Medicare
Medicaid
libertarian
liberal
conservative
Third Way
apartheid
Peloponnesian Wars
revolutions of 1848
the Axis
Niccolo Machiavelli
Russian Revolution of 1917
Third World
Mohandas (Mahatma) Gandhi
Charlemagne
Mao Zedong
National Security Letter
Free Markets & Milton Friedman
Opium War

detente
Joseph Stalin
NATO
Reign of Terror
Victorian Age
the Crusades
Boer War
Holocaust
Berlin Wall
Industrial Revolution
Sino-Japanese War
 
Magna Carta
Original Sin
Providence
Mecca

Koran
Torah
Tower of Babel
Bacchanalia
Yom Kippur
Siddhartha Gautama
Krishna
Muhammad
Martin Luther
Ramadan
 
in loco parentis
jihad
Anarchism
Aristocracy
Autocracy
Democracy
Direct democracy
Representative democracy
Despotism
Fascism
Absolute monarchy
Constitutional monarchy
Oligarchy
Federalism
Republic

Wheat & Chaff
third rail
Achilles' heel
six of one, half dozen of the other
cultural literacy
DDT
Bretton Woods
Atlantic Charter
Marshall Plan
Classical Liberalism
Social / New Liberalism
Conservatism
Libertarianism
Socialism
Cuban Missile Crisis
antitrust legislation

arbitration
Web 2.0
affirmative action
amicus curiae
block grant
Rupert Murdoch
broad construction
blue laws
checks and balances
clear and present danger
civil liberties
Cesar Chavez
Hugo Chavez

civil liberties
cloture
FISA
coattail effect

conscientious objector
containment, policy of
dark horse
de facto segregation
domino theory
double jeopardy
due process of law
Sunni Islam
Shia Islam
Sharia

Eastern Establishment
Electoral College
laissez-faire
entitlements
equal protection of the laws
Equal Rights Amendment
fellow traveler
filibuster
History of filibuster
franchise
gender gap
gerrymander
fairness doctrine
gunboat diplomacy
habeas corpus
libertarianism
anarchism
hawks and doves
lame duck
line-item veto
logrolling
military-industrial complex
Miranda decision
narrow construction
nolo contendere

patronage
pocket veto
political action committees
poll tax
pork-barrel legislation
quorum
rider
rugged individualism
segregation
separate but equal
slush fund
smoke-filled room
stare decisis
states’ rights
suffrage
the Ugly American
Bakke decision
Bay of Pigs
big stick diplomacy
Black Muslims
Title IX
Black Panthers
Chappaquiddick incident
Civil Rights Act of 1964
My Lai massacre
New Deal
New Left
Plessy versus Ferguson
Progressive movement
Roe versus Wade
spoils system
Voting Rights Act of 1965
women’s movement
yellow journalism
Yellow Peril
ABM Treaty
anarchism
anti-Semitism
apartheid
balkanization
banana republics
caging (voter suppression)
bicameral legislature
brinkmanship
Kyoto Protocol
chauvinism
civil disobedience
coup d’état
cultural imperialism
demagogue
despotism
détente
ethnic cleansing
Geneva Conventions
genocide
glasnost
global village
gulag
intifada
jingoism
junta
neocolonialism
NGOs
cloture
oligarchy
ombudsman
pogrom
rapprochement
realpolitik
smart weapons
theocracy
zero-sum game
Zionism
affluent society
bear market
bourgeoisie
bull market
capital gain
Caveat emptor
Chapter 11 bankruptcy

closed shop
eminent domain
Family and Medical Leave Act of 1993
golden parachute


Civics: Legal  Terms

Cultural Literacy - Geography

50 States Go Where?
US Capitals
Geographic Continent
Africa
South East Asia
USA Jigsaw
Crossword Map
USA & Canada
Latin America
Europe
Russia
Asia
Middle East &
North Africa



We journalists make it a point to know very little about an extremely wide variety of topics; this is how we stay objective.
Dave Barry
Course Goal & Description

This course’s goal is to help you become a careful and precise editor of your own writing and that of others. While this is a basic journalism editing course designed to acquaint you with the skills you will need to master in order to work on a newspaper, magazine, online site, or broadcast newsroom copy desk, what you learn in this class will (1) help you excel in any media field and (2) make you a better writer and editor of your own copy. To that point, please note the following quote from the professional world:

“Everybody has to be a copy editor."
-- Ju-Don Robert's, Managing Editor of washingtonpost.com

And note, too,  this letter from a former student of this class.

Description of Course

The lecture portion of this course will offer a major emphasis on the nuts and bolts of editing and writing -- spelling, grammar, punctuation, word usage, style (in this case, AP) and math-for-journalists skills.

But ultimately, the onus is on you to acquire these skills outside of the lecture. If you believe you have some weak spots in these skills, then make a point of studying the sites listed below, many of which have programmed quizzes in different areas of grammar and punctuation that will offer you explanations. I note this because these are skills you need to succeed, but also because 40 percent of your overall grade for this course comes from the lecture, which emphasizes these skills.

But in addtion, in the 15 weeks ahead we will also focus on current affairs, which requires you to read the news.

Classroom Meetings

The lecture portion of this class meets twice a week. The grade you receive in this lecture will be combined -- in consultation with your lab instructor -- with your editing lab grade in figuring your final grade. Your course grade is 40 percent lecture and 60 percent lab.
.
Office Hours

I am available to you this semester – and beyond – to talk about this class, to talk about journalism and communications, to talk about your career, or to just talk. My office hours are on my schedule:

Pre-requisites for JOU 4201

MMC 2100 – Writing for Mass Communication – and JOU 3101 – Reporting. If you have not taken and passed these classes with a C or better, then you are not supposed to be in this class.

Required Texts and Supplies
  • Log in to the e-Learning Support Services web site at http://lss.at.ufl.edu. If you use bookmarks in your browser, this is the page to bookmark. You must have a valid GatorLink ID (username and password) to log in to e-Learning. We will be using this at times in lecture.
  • To drill deeper into the issues of journalism and to find editing aids of many kinds, check out & bookmark Dr. R's Journalism Links
In addition, if you are serious about writing and/or editing as a career, you need to be assembling a library of professional texts. To begin, I would suggest:
Attendance

Class attendance is required.  More than three absences may result in an incomplete for this course. For sure, after your first absence, every lecture you miss means your grade drops a level A becomes B+ and B+ becomes B and so on. Arriving late or leaving early will be considered an absence. To receive credit for tests and quizzes, you must attend and be on time. No make-ups will be arranged for unexcused absences or tardiness.  In addtion, whether the absence is legitimate or not, there will be no classwork make-ups. Life is just too darn complicated as it is, and when I have 80-some students juggling deadlines - well, it is just too complicated. The key here is whether your absence is legitimate or not.

Note: University-approved absences must be documented (in advance, if for an approved university activity) according to official university policy. Obtaining written verification for an excused absence is your responsibility.

Grading

As noted, your course grade is 40 percent lecture and 60 percent lab. The lecture portion of your grade will be determined based on:

  • Five  tests worth 100 points each. (You can drop the lowest score.) Tests are always comprehensive and  will come from anything discussed in class and the readings, which you need to not only read, but study. However, as noted, they will strongly emphasize the nuts-and-bolts.  Tentative test dates are listed under  Lecture Schedule & Assignments below.
  • Your class participation, which will be determined by such things as your attendance and your preparation to answer questions regarding the issues of editing.

Grade Scale for the lecture portion of this course

A = 90-100    B+ = 87-89    B = 80-86    C+ = 77-79    C = 70-76
D+ = 67-69    D = 60-66    F = Below 60       

Your final lecture grade is based on:

  • 90%  The tests  and  any other  graded assignments.
  • 10% Such things as your attendance,  your  participation, your classroom demeanor, your willingness to work with and collaborate with others, your participation in class discussions, and your contributions to the class in whatever form that may take.

Accommodations

Please let me know immediately if you have any kind of problem or disability that would hinder your work in this course. I will do my best to help you. Students requesting classroom accommodation must first register with the Dean of Students Office, which will provide documentation to the student who must then provide this documentation to the Instructor when requesting accommodation.

Campus Helping Resources

See links on front page.

Academic Conduct

Commit yourself to honesty and integrity if you haven’t already. If you engage in any form of academic misconduct, including, but not limited to, cheating, plagiarism, fabrication, and aiding and abetting, the penalties could be severe You are required  to read Academic Honesty. I will work under the assumption that you have done so. In addition, go to  link to Honor Code on front page and read this.

Caveat

Sometimes a class such as this will deal with controversial topics, so be warned that words that may be considered offensive or even ideological may be spoken in the context of the subjects we are discussing. As a teacher, I have no political or social agenda, so do not try to answer in a way you believe might comport with what I want to hear or read. Feel free to advocate any position as long as you remain respectful of others' opinions, and always be able to defend your point of view.

Policy on Electronic Devices

I do not allow electronic transmission devices, such as beepers, cellular phones and computers of any size in my classes. You must have all such devices in the "off" mode and stored away when in class. When I do what looks like the gator chomp, I am saying close your cell phones and laptops.

Policy on Indifference

I do not allow indifference in my classes and instead require that you be engaged. How does indifference manifest itself? It includes:

  • Chatting during class, which is rude
  • Arriving late or leaving early, which is rude
  • Doing homework or scrolling the ’net during class, which is rude
  • Nodding off or sleeping, which is rude

If you cannot check your indifference at the door, then drop this class.  I and your fellow engaged students do not have time or the inclination to accommodate your behavior.*

* Such rudeness is also known as “social autism.” The disease of autism is often referred to as mental blindness. It interferes with the normal development of the brain and can affect a person's speech, sensory development and communication skills. This is an impairment for which a person is not responsible. On the other hand, social autism is social blindness and is not an impairment, but a choice.


Lecture Schedule & Assignments

Media is a word that has come to mean bad journalism


Note:
All of this below is of course tentative -- but it should give you a basic road map for the semester. You certainly should expect that things could change on occasion.

Week 1 - Jan. 6 & 8

“A popular Government without popular information or the means of acquiring it, is but a Prologue to a Farce or a Tragedy or perhaps both. Knowledge will forever govern ignorance, and a people who mean to be their own Governors, must arm themselves with the power knowledge gives.”

  • Intro to this editing lecture.
    • Note: Questions from the syllabus could show up on your first test.
  • Begin reading  The New York Times and Gainesville Sun daily.
    • Questions on current events will appear on your tests.
  • FYI: Your first test, a Diagnostic Assessment Test, is scheduled for next week.
  • We have a virtual guest lecturer for the Thursday, Jan. 8, class.
    •  In other words, DON'T COME TO LECTURE. Instead, find a computer outside class and go through these two AP practice quizzes. Questions from these will appear on future tests.
    • AP Style Practice from Doug Fisher: Journalism Instructor at University of South Carolina
  • OK. Now to test and hone your skills, do a sampling of these practice quizzes, which offer excellent explanations about the correct answers.You may see some of these on tests:
Readings / Assignments  for Week 2:
Week 2 - Jan. 13 & 15 (Test No. 1 on Thursday)

"The great obstacle to discovering the shape of the earth, the continents, and the ocean was not ignorance but the illusion of knowledge."

 –  Daniel Boorstin

Daily News Quiz
  • Design/Typography Etc. Lecture 
  • Accuracy Lecture
  • Test No. 1:
    • Your first test, a Diagnostic Assessment Test, is scheduled for Thusday of this week. It is on e-Learning  and will be available from 12:01 a.m. to 11:59 p.m. In other words, don't come to lecture. Instead, find a computer somewhere today and take this test. You have 60 minutes to complete it. It will consist of 100 multiple-choice questions on grammar, punctuation, spelling and AP style. These are all the kinds of things you should have accumulated in your skills sets over your previous required classes. Other than that, I  cannot say how you would study.  It  will give  both  you  and  me  an  understanding  about  where  your  skill  level  is and what you -- and I -- need to work on. 
Readings / Assignments  for Week 3:

Week 3 - Jan. 20 & 22

"The role of the press is simply to make sure that in the short run we don't get screwed and it does this best not by treating us as consumers of news, but by encouraging the conditions of public discourse and life."

 James Carey
Daily News Quiz

  • Verbs Lecture
  • Lay-Lie-Affect-Effect Lecture 
  • Pronoun Case / Who-Whom Lecture

Readings / Assignments  for Week 4:

Week 4 - Jan. 27 & 29

"In the absence of governmental checks and balances present in other areas of our national life, the only effective restraint upon executive policy and power in the area of national defense and international affairs may lie in an
enlightened citizenry. ... Without an informed and free press, there cannot be an enlightened people."
 Justice Potter Stewart

Daily News Quiz

  • Agreement Lecture 1
  • Agreement Lecture 2
  • Modifiers Lecture

Readings / Assignments  for Week 5:
Week 5 - Feb. 3 & 5

"Constructing passive sentences is a way of concealing your own testicles, lest someone cut them off."
 –  Ian Holm
playing psychoanalyst Ernesto Morales
in the film "The Treatment"
Daily News Quiz

  • Comma Lecture
  • Possessives Lecture

Readings / Assignments  for Week 6:
  • WWW: That/Which/Who and Restrictive/Nonrestrictive Constructions (know the difference between clauses and phrases) pp. 103-104
  • Read: Using Commas
  • Do a sampling of these practice quizzes, which offer excellent explanations about the correct answers.You may see some of these on tests:
Week 6 - Feb. 10 & 12 (Test No. 2 on Thursday) Here is your test review: This will cover everything from Day 1 on. This will cover all readings, anything we have or any guest speaker has gone over in lecture and current affairs questions.

"Always use the proper name for things. Fear of a name increases fear of the thing itself."
Albus Dumbledore, Hogwarts Headmaster
Daily News Quiz

  • That, Who, Which Lecture
  • Test No. 2 on Thursday

Readings / Assignments  for Week 7:
  • WWW: Punctuation, Chapter 8
  • Do a sampling of these practice quizzes, which offer excellent explanations about the correct answers.You may see some of these on tests:
Week 7 - Feb. 17 & 19

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–  Source unknown; it is all over the blogosphere
Daily News Quiz

  • Punctuation Lecture
  • Misused Words & Homonyms Lecture

Readings / Assignments  for Week 8:
  • WWW: Word Use, pp. 185-232
  • Do a sampling of these practice quizzes, which offer excellent explanations about the correct answers.You may see some of these on tests:
Week 8 - Feb. 24 & 26

"In matters of style, swim with the current; in matters of principle, stand like a rock."
–  Thomas Jefferson

Daily News Quiz
  • Jeopeditry-Homonyms
  • Extra Words: Concision = Precision Lecture - Feb. 24
  • Class on Feb. 26 is cancelled

Readings / Assignments  for Week 9:

  • WWW: Clarity, Conciseness, Chapter 10,
  • Do a sampling of these practice quizzes, which offer excellent explanations about the correct answers.You may see some of these on tests:
Week 9  - March 3 & 5 (National Grammar Day is March 4)

"I'm not sure local papers need to cover Iraq, need to cover global events."

–  Jack Welch
 former G.E.chairman who considered buying
the Boston Globe Click this Link
Daily News Quiz

  • Headline Lecture 1 (Headlines as Art)
  • Headline Lecture 2 (Intro to Search Engine Optimization)

Readings / Assignments  for Week 10:

  • WWW: Spelling, Chapter 9
Spring Break Spring Break Spring Break Spring Break


Week 10 - March 17 & 19 (Test No. 3 March 19) Here is your test review: This will cover everything from Day 1 on. This will cover all readings, anything we have or any guest speaker has gone over in lecture and current affairs questions.

"I deplore the putrid state into which our newspapers have passed, and the malignity, the vulgarity and the mendacious spirit of those who write them."

Thomas Jefferson
Daily News Quiz


  • Bias Lecture
  • Test No. 3

Readings  Assignments  for Week 11:
  • WWW: Style, Chapter 11
  • Do a sampling of these practice quizzes, which offer excellent explanations about the correct answers.You may see some of these on tests:.
    • Exercises in Grammar, Usage and Associated Press Style
So, Dr. Norman Lewis' lectures on numeracy for journalists begin next week. In the meantime, you might want to review some of the following readings linked on Scriptorium:
Week 11 - March 24 & 26

Advisory Council is here Thursday and Friday, March 26-27, and the job fair is Thursday.

東 問 西答 
동문서답

 – East Question West Answer,  a Chinese and Korean proverb
  • Numeracy for Journalists Lecture: March 24: Computation
  • Numeracy for Journalists Lecture: March 26: Application

Daily News Quiz

Readings / Assignments  for Week 12:
  • WWW: Sense and Sensitivity, Chapter 12
  • Do a sampling of these practice quizzes, which offer excellent explanations about the correct answers.You may see some of these on tests:.
    • Exercises in Grammar, Usage and Associated Press Style
Week 12 - March 31 & April 2

“For better or worse, editing is what editors are for; and editing is selection and choice of material. That editors' newspaper or broadcast can and do abuse this power is beyond doubt, but that is no reason to deny the discretion Congress provided.”
Chief Justice Warren E. Burger
in majority opinion in 7-2 ruling  that allowed radio
and television stations to refuse to sell time for
political or controversial advertisements, 29 May 1973.

  • Numeracy for Journalists Lecture: March 31: Polling 1
  • Numeracy for Journalists Lecture: April 2: Polling 2

Daily News Quiz

Readings / Assignments  for Week 13:
  • Read Journalism Without Journalists
  • Do a sampling of these practice quizzes, which offer excellent explanations about the correct answers.This is an excellent review for the final tests. The Dow Jones Newspaper Fund internship program requires applicants to take a test that includes 20 grammar items. Here (On the Newsroom 101 site) are the grammar questions from the DJNF tests since 1998 (used with their kind permission).
Week 13 - April 7 & 9

"Facts are stupid things."
Ronald Reagan

"Ideas are more dangerous than guns. We don't let our people have guns. Why should we let them have ideas?''
  Josef Stalin
  • Numeracy for Journalists Lecture: April 7: Chance
  • Numeracy for Journalists Lecture: April 9: Logic

Daily News Quiz

Week 14 - April 14 & 16 (Test No. 4 on Tuesday) Here is your test review: This will cover everything from Day 1 on but especially the numeracy lectures. This will cover all readings, anything we have or any guest speaker has gone over in lecture and will include current affairs questions.

"Frank presentation of ominous facts is never more necessary than it is today, because we seem to have developed escapism into a system of thought. We resent a call to thinking and hate unfamiliar argument that does not tally with what we already believe or would like to believe. We walk into our future as we walked into the war, blindfolded."
  Joseph Schumpeter,
preface to the second edition of
Capitalism, Socialism, and Democracy

“The enemy isn’t conservatism. The enemy isn’t liberalism. The enemy is bullshit.”

Daily News Quiz

  • Test No. 4
Readings / Assignments  for Week 15:

Week  15 - April 21 (Test No. 5 -Final Assessment) Here is your test review: It will be on e-Learning, but I have yet to set the open times. In other words, like the earlier assessment test, don't come to lecture. Instead, find a computer somewhere and take this test. You have 60 minutes to complete it. It will consist of 100 multiple-choice questions on grammar, punctuation, spelling and AP style. These are all the kinds of things you should have accumulated in your skills sets over your previous required classes -- and, we hope, during the course of this semester.

"A person without any sense of shame is no longer a human being."
Mencius